Jewelz would like to share a short story written by her dad when she was back in highschool...
The Fence
(A message for world peace)
There was once a white child, a black child, and a brown child. By fate or what seemed like predestination, they were born exactly the same date.
They were next-door neighbors too.
They were energetic and smiling babies, so innocent and care-free, brought to earth in times of unrelenting chaos among nations.
As they grew up, they could constantly hear the voices and laughter of one another.
But they could not meet.
They could not play with one another.
And this made them lonely and isolated.
Each of them could not understand why there was a fence separating their homes.
The years slowly passed by, and the lack of much-needed friendship pushed them to study hard and pursue brilliant careers. They traveled far and wide.
They eventually ended up as the top leaders of their respective powerful countries, handling delicate matters of utmost importance to world peace.
Planet earth was continuously bombarded by myriad of problems arising from greed and the desire for world dominance.
Like an inflated balloon, the bursting point was near.
The world was heading for the ultimate war.
The white man, the black man, and the brown man were called upon to personally meet and try to resolve the most volatile conflict in the history of mankind.
One humid, summer afternoon, a round table was prepared with three simple chairs. There was a lighted candle, a flower, and a dove at the center of the table, in the hope that these three powerful leaders with diverse backgrounds would come to terms and avert the total annihilation of mankind.
The burdens on their shoulders were enormous with so little time left. The future hung on the wisdom of the three, with their advisers and statisticians whispering mixed opinions. The media were in a frenzy, the armies were alert, and the entire populace were uneasy.
They met.
They merely stared at one another, unmoving, with total concentration and focus.
Not a word was spoken.
Somewhere deep in their subconscious mind, an inexplicable feeling of loneliness was suddenly released, a euphoric sensation of happiness.
They meekly smiled.
Unexpectedly, with outstretched arms, they embraced.
The three of them in a glorious triangle of unity.
Together they lifted their tightly-clasped hands and showed their genuine smiles for the whole world to see that peace is the ultimate solution.
Everyone in the room broke down in silent tears, amidst thunderous applause and a standing ovation from the gallery.
Still not a single word was spoken.
Everyone could not understand the wisdom of the three men.
But the three remembered the fence. They knew. They understood.
After that fateful humid afternoon, the three exhausted leaders passed on their instructions to their respective governments and opted to return to their neighborhood where they were born.
The fence was still there.
Dehydration seemed to seep into their bodies and with their last ounce of strength, all three embraced, and the fence gave way to their combined weight.
A gentle breeze swept through their neighborhood and the three men looked high up in the heavens and seemed to fly into the skies above.
And the clouds accepted them.
There were no need for words.
Suddenly, a bolt of lightning appeared from out of nowhere and struck the fallen fence into tiny pieces.
A breathtaking rainbow appeared for all the world to see. And from thereon, planet earth was a beautiful place to live in all eternity.
Written By:
Boogie Lim
Cebu, Philippines
*Brought to you by UA&P I am S.T.R.O.N.G.
What do you think of the short story? :)
271 comments:
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wow this is so inspiring. i hope the day that the great lightning struck will also struck corrut politicians
i'm sure peace is not that far from our reach.. i think the problem is with the people too.. in the story the people were to dependent on their leaders.. peace is not rested on the hands of leaders but in the hands of the people too..
i hope things were that simple
just passing by.. this entry has something i dont know waht it is yet but with some revisions it would be great
to charles:
i also share the same views with you but as an anonymous blogger said to achieve peace we must all work together.. i think it worked weel for the story cause there are limited characters.. hahaha
its not real.. peace is a temporary state countries achieved because of money
peace out!!
oh im tired of politics ill relate this blog to myself.. ill fin inner peace and destroy my fence
galing nit ah
walangjo lalim nito ah... buti nahukay ko sarili ko ah.. hahaha
to jewelz:
yeah limited characters and controlled by human mind. cause politician don't use their minds or if they do its tainted with greed or malicious intention
to jewelz:
yeah limited characters and controlled by human mind. cause politician don't use their minds or if they do its tainted with greed or malicious intention
kay hirap nito tumanda na sila sa story pa lng sa totoong buhay to apo n nila mag memeet for peace eh.. or pag wala na idedestroy hahaha
i'm 55 years old and i grew up in a culture that wants world peace but until now were not even close to achieving it
oi charles feeling ka!!!! kala mo kung sino kang malinis mag-salita hehe ang talino mo pakingan sa blog ah hahaha... peace tau!!! un ang goal ng entry na to hehehe
syempre nman ako pa. di lng intellect ko gumagana dito pati will hehehe
good post!!
can i do something about world peace im only a highschool student
everyone has a stand or a responsibility for peace.. even an infant has one because he is made in the image and likeness of God
lets put it this way peace is for everyone and if you dont make a stand or demand for it you wont achiece it
this site makes me strong!!
to all my friends na nag comment at inasar ako panalo kau hahaha
gabs hintay ko post mo!!!
this all happened without any words spoken? myged! awkward silence.. BOOORING! too much drama! eek!
ACTION speaks louder than WORDS! duh?! did your mom ever teach you that?!
words are overated actions deserves to have some spotlight
nice answer vylettepurpleness!! ang galing eh.. straight to the point
Thanks pop for sharing this.. :) lots of symbols and imagery..
I enjoyed reading this short story...
This should be shared with everyone! :) I'll share it with my family and friends.
This is easier said than done! If only there was world peace... We can all live in a better place!
There is still hope!
We just have to trust one another to make this happen...
Nice story! Your dad writes well :)
The story is short and simple for everyone to understand. You can share it with children and adults... lots of imagery.
I hope this story will reach far and wide... share them with your friends!!
You can find many beautiful rainbows in Hawaii..
how cme you guys talk about rainbows?
is rainbow the symbol for peace?
to anonymous:
in our class the symbol for peace is a bird
no its just colorful and nice to look at - means harmony! and it's part of the logo. let it be. leave the rainbow alone.
world peace just like a beauty pageant heheeh
i really don't know what to put here. but it's nice! =)
-lil bro.ü
peace tayo ha.. iamstrong is a good site
what can i do for the world? i'm still young.
-lil bro.ü
guys thank yu for the comments!!!
what bird? any kind? cheap. it should be a DOVE!
wah chill lng ha... any bird will do kaya
you're right, ahya! the videos are great nga!
-lil bro.ü
btw, what is this for ahya?
-lil bro.ü
just dropping by to commend the authogr of this entry.. its a nice piece y the way i hoe you can create you own blog and share your talent with the whole world maybe just maybe it can be the tool for world peace
a bird? aahahahhahaa! love it!
im saying hi to SARA, (again)
chuck_bass?
this is good... do you know what the topic is? how about some decent and worth having comments
very nice story, very cute
hahaha. chuck bass spotting S.. what the?!
no. any kind of bird will not do. so you think a chicken represents peace? i don't think so. it is usually used to fight?! so it should be a dove.. make it more decent.
the fence=coolness:)
Wonderful story :)
with all the conflicts and world domination, there's no better solution than to comprehend and be passive at times when you need to..
i mean, it's better to listen first than speak..
God gave us two hands, two ears and one tongue so that we'll act and listen more than speak..
if all of us will talk and talk and not 'walk the talk' it would be barely possible for us to achieve it..
like the three persons in the story..
they did not say anything just total silence and embrace..and what happened in the end?
they achieved what they had dreamt of..
even though this is just a story but we can pull something from this..the valuable lessons..
and i hope you learned one..
anyway, nice post ate jewelz!
to chales:
are you familiar of 'imagery' when it comes to writing stories and poems?
this is what the story is all about.. imagery..
but at the same time it has lots of valuable lessons to it..
and i hope you learned one..
good day!
TO HUSBANDS & WIVES who wants to make peace when they quarrel;
You could apply Jewelz article regarding peace. No need to argue much.Just hug & embrace each other.Kapag pumalag at galit pa rin...Just embrace again & dont let Go! THEN PEACE NA...
According to the Bible, A Rainbow would remind us of the promise of God that there would never be a flood like Noah's.
Simple story but very interesting!
After removing fences,BORDERS should be removed too.That way no more Visas to the U.S. and other countries. Wouldnt it be nice? That's the original plan of God anyways.
Planet earth is for all the people,all kinds of people.
Peach Strawberry:
I just got out of class.. thank you for your comment! :) and thank you for explaining to CHARLES all about imagery.
I definitely agree with you that sometimes we should stop and listen because most of the time we just talk and talk.. but more importantly, if we want to achieve something, we should of course take action!
Thanks again Peach strawberry!
hey... chickens are not a symbol for peace!!
rainbows are pretty..
hey there lil bro, you can do lots for the world... what about helping your mom out with the chores? That's something.. or even making your bed in the morning. Start with the little things.
Respecting your parents and obeying them can be number one on your list... :) what do you think lil bro?
True PEACE starts from your Family.How could the world have peace when you dont have peace with your wife,husband,brother,sister or in-laws?
we should set aside our differences and work together towards a peaceful world for we are all human beings..
bagay na bagay d2 sa story ung song na "we are the world" by michael jackson and company :D
Charles, it is not easy to break down the fences in stories and in real life.
Anonymous; it is not nspiring and politician will always be there without lightning.
to anonymous; Peace is so far out of reach nowadays because of greedyness and corrupt ways of many leaders.
To anonymous; Things are really that simple and that's it.
To distant blogger; if your comprehension is in tact, you can realy understand this article. Read it again.
I agree with you jewelz; we must all work together.
to anonymous; there are many countries in this world that are in peace without the money that you are saying.
to 50 cents; peace in my friend.
to sos girls; politics will always be around, so get use to it, its here forever.
to bisaya; talagang magaling ito.basahin mo pa ulit marami ka pang matutuhan.
to anonymous; talagang malalim ito kaya pwede mo ulitin basahin para matuto ka pa.
to charles; not all politicians are all alike, some are greedy and some are not. They have a mind of their own like you.
to ic.Pilipinas; your comment is kinda funny however, it might be somewhat realist
to the old woman; you are still young at 55. I am 70 and still inspired. Peace will be with us with all of us working together.
to charles; if you think you are that clever,think again! You probably need some tutoring.
to anonymous; as a young high school student, you have the opportunity to contribute to world peace by merely doing your own responsibility as a law abiding citizen.
to anonymous; your comment about the infant image is interesting, and logical
to anonymous; you dont have to demand peace to achieve it. You have to fight for it vogrously with all your might.
to active reader; your insight about you liking reading the story simply described the essence of the article.
to anonymous; if you think it so boring to read this article, well, it says lot about you! You can be perceived as an egototistical maniac!
to vylettepurpleness; your perspective is much appreciated by other reader like me. I like the rainbow myself.
to good girl; sharing this article with your family is a good gesture, I did the same thing.
to peacedude; I share your view that it is not easy, but it can be done.
to jewelz; sharing it with friend and others will do us all good. Nice comments girl.
to anonymous; not only you can find lots of rainbow in Hawaii, you can also have everlasting peace there too. I know because I am from that place.
to anonumous; if you dont like talking about rainbow, you can ceratinly read the other part of the article. Mind you rainbow is a symbol of peace.
to jewelz, your thoughts about your dad is great.
to chuck, bird is a symbol of freedom and peace. You have a bird too that is your favorite. ha ha ha
to critical, I am so pleased by your short but concise remarks about the article. I too like it.
to anonymous, if you think dove is the best bird for it, then it is. Although some chicken might look like a suitable one.
peachstrawberry; I like the way you commented and you are absolutely right about what you said. Keep it up.
to jane; what a true and factual thing to say. All of us can learn from it and our family is the starting block.
to sarah; you are on target about the subconscious mind. I appreciate your sharing the website for it.
to grandma; we can learn something from your insight! But considering your age and wisdom, perhaps there is still room for learning even at our twilight time.
to anonymous, setting aside our differences is attainable. There is always a good solution to all of this.
to jewelz; Respect must be earned and not given! I agree that we should respect our parents however, not all parents are respectable, there is always exception to the rule.
Peace can be achieve by a common objective. Good leadership and less corruption from our leaders is a must.
Different nations if you noticed have variety of of colors in their flags. The same concept can be applied by a rainbow! Peace my friends.
he article is simply amazing! It has good merits.
The choice of a bird either a dove or other beautiful birds can be selected. We all have our choice. Just choose one that makes you feel better.
The article deserves praises and good comments. Afterall, it a good gesture to share it with us.
The comments made by Charles opposing the views of the articles and at he same time unsettling ones, is welcome as well, but Charles should also think of other people think about him at this point. If you think (Charles)that it is cool the way you commented about this article, heck you got to think more about your personality.
Good wisdom and friendship can last a lone time. The three personlities depicted in the article shares the same views bu many of us, and of course differing opinions as well.
Mistakes are made by many of us, many comments are shared about this article, but one would think that by just conceptualizing and or understanding the writer's intent, you can only appreciate it.
The article deserves praises and good comments.
Is our world on the threshold of peace or on the brink of disaster?
A question for everyone
From Ping:
Peace can be achieve by a common objective. Good leadership and less corruption from our leaders is a must.
That is true Ping. May I also share that everyone in this world is imperfect that's why we are having difficulty in achieving peace.
STRANGE world, this! The civilized people today know more about killing than living, more about war than peace. Yet the inborn desire of man is for life, not death; for peace, not war. How can we explain this topsy-turvy condition?
many statesmen have been sincere in their efforts, why have all man’s hopes for peace turned into bitter failures?
Here's one reason
Man, as a result of Adam’s sin, is imperfect and sinful; thus no peace pact can guarantee that greedy, selfish rulers will not crop up
Another reason...
the superhuman ruler of this world is Satan the Devil. “The whole world is lying in the power of the wicked one,” 1 John 5:19
This means that all nations of the earth are under Satan’s control. No peace pacts, bullets or atom bombs can nullify the peace-wrecking efforts of the Devil, “the god of this system of things.”
I agree with that
To old woman:
Because world peace cannot be achieved by humans alone.
This is from an article I've read about mankind's failure
For centuries, men and nations have spoken about peace, have debated peace, have signed hundreds of peace treaties. What has been the result? In the last 80 years, there has virtually never been a moment when some nation or group has not been at war. Clearly, peace has eluded mankind. So the question is, Why have all man’s efforts to establish international peace failed, and why is man incapable of bringing about true peace that will endure?
--From the same article
"The simple answer is that mankind has not turned to the right source for true peace. Under the influence of Satan the Devil, men have created organizations that fall victim to their own weaknesses and vices—their greed and ambition, their lust for power and prominence. They have gone to institutions of higher learning and have established foundations and think tanks, which have only thought out more means of oppression and destruction."
what article is that from aimee?
How would you define unity?
absence of friction and strife
How we wish the world is free from strife and friction
Thousands of peace treaties have been made and broken
Often because world leaders are more concerned with their own supermacy than with peace and unity
the fact that two nations are not at war does not mean that they are united in peace
really, are two men with pistols pointed at each other at peace simply because neither has pulled the trigger?
that is true jun
Human efforts to unity no matter how sincere have proved futile
How can we achieve true, permanent world peace?
a smile can build bridges to the fence. it can even bring a very large wall down. break free - smile with all your heart and win a friend
it sure is inspiring, especially to the country that we live in now. we have to join hands and break free form corrption. start sitting down and discuss matters that are of importance like education and jobs.
offering a sincere and appropriate apology for a wrong committed will go a long way toward making peace.
let us all smile... for peace
A smile may contribute peace to your neighborhood, but how we wish that a warm sincere smile would bring peace in the entire world
we are all hoping for peace, it is human nature. don't worry world peace is fast approaching
Humankind today can do nothing to bring world peace, it is beyond our capacity. Leave it to the One who can make all things possible.
and for us people, the best thing we can do is to make peace with people we encounter everyday and our efforts will be rewarded.
God is the only one who could bring true and permanent peace in the Universe.No one else
So no matter how intelligent world leaders may be, bringing true peace here on Earth is not for them
certainly
but it doesn't mean that we should disobey authorities. We should remain law abiding citizens
God permitted them to be in their relative positions
and lawsare for our own good like traffic rules
Now there is a huge fence in the entire world
And soon the lightning will destroy that fence into pieces. That lightning will come from God
Peace should start from ourselves
Peace should start from ourselves
Peace to everyone!!
We are in the brink of disaster...
how peaceable are we as individuals?
you can answer that question personally
Iam peaceable.. im friendly...
Are you the type that reacts violently when hurt?
No, but i think violently.. hehhe just kidding
who loves violent movies?
i dont, do you?
hahahaha... I like watching action movies
those are violent movies...
hehee... I know you watch them too
keep on posting your comments people
Buhay pa kaya tayo pag dumating na ang world peace?
I wish buhay pa ako nun
I want to witness how it's like to be in a world of peace
We all wanted to have peace
Computer games pa nga lang puro violence ang concept, how can we promote peace
Sa karamihan hindi fun kapag hindi violent
if the youth today is exposed to violence paano na yan?
that is true
i agree with that
gusto ng tao ng peace but then iba ang output
Puro violence and nakikita ng youth today.
even entertainment does not promote peace
do you notice sa mga computer games, mostly satanic concepts
We can ask ourselves do we really like peace?
I cansee teenager who are very happy playing in an arcade, very happy kapag nakakapatay sila sa game
What is happening to us?
kahit sobrang galing ng leader natin if the subordinates itself loves violence, walng mangyayari talaga
Violence is everywhere talaga
Of course promoting violent games and entertainment is still going on. Who could stop those people?
it maybe hard to admit pero its true
nice comments...
look around us and think
galing ng post na 'to!
i like the story
It may not bethat simple to attain peace like sa story but it means we all want to have it
i commend those who loves peace not just by word but by their actions and mentality
I also believe that ethnic differences contribute much in chaos that we have
even in the philippines may discrimination pa din
I agree with that
kapag bisaya ka na pumunta sda manila you can feel that, lalo na for average peaple
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