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Tuesday, February 26, 2008

UA&P - I AM S.T.R.O.N.G: The Fence

Jewelz would like to share a short story written by her dad when she was back in highschool...

The Fence
(A message for world peace)

There was once a white child, a black child, and a brown child. By fate or what seemed like predestination, they were born exactly the same date.

They were next-door neighbors too.

They were energetic and smiling babies, so innocent and care-free, brought to earth in times of unrelenting chaos among nations.

As they grew up, they could constantly hear the voices and laughter of one another.

But they could not meet.

They could not play with one another.

And this made them lonely and isolated.

Each of them could not understand why there was a fence separating their homes.

The years slowly passed by, and the lack of much-needed friendship pushed them to study hard and pursue brilliant careers. They traveled far and wide.

They eventually ended up as the top leaders of their respective powerful countries, handling delicate matters of utmost importance to world peace.

Planet earth was continuously bombarded by myriad of problems arising from greed and the desire for world dominance.

Like an inflated balloon, the bursting point was near.

The world was heading for the ultimate war.

The white man, the black man, and the brown man were called upon to personally meet and try to resolve the most volatile conflict in the history of mankind.

One humid, summer afternoon, a round table was prepared with three simple chairs. There was a lighted candle, a flower, and a dove at the center of the table, in the hope that these three powerful leaders with diverse backgrounds would come to terms and avert the total annihilation of mankind.

The burdens on their shoulders were enormous with so little time left. The future hung on the wisdom of the three, with their advisers and statisticians whispering mixed opinions. The media were in a frenzy, the armies were alert, and the entire populace were uneasy.









They met.

They merely stared at one another, unmoving, with total concentration and focus.

Not a word was spoken.

Somewhere deep in their subconscious mind, an inexplicable feeling of loneliness was suddenly released, a euphoric sensation of happiness.

They meekly smiled.

Unexpectedly, with outstretched arms, they embraced.

The three of them in a glorious triangle of unity.

Together they lifted their tightly-clasped hands and showed their genuine smiles for the whole world to see that peace is the ultimate solution.

Everyone in the room broke down in silent tears, amidst thunderous applause and a standing ovation from the gallery.

Still not a single word was spoken.

Everyone could not understand the wisdom of the three men.

But the three remembered the fence. They knew. They understood.

After that fateful humid afternoon, the three exhausted leaders passed on their instructions to their respective governments and opted to return to their neighborhood where they were born.

The fence was still there.

Dehydration seemed to seep into their bodies and with their last ounce of strength, all three embraced, and the fence gave way to their combined weight.

A gentle breeze swept through their neighborhood and the three men looked high up in the heavens and seemed to fly into the skies above.

And the clouds accepted them.

There were no need for words.

Suddenly, a bolt of lightning appeared from out of nowhere and struck the fallen fence into tiny pieces.

A breathtaking rainbow appeared for all the world to see. And from thereon, planet earth was a beautiful place to live in all eternity.


Written By:
Boogie Lim
Cebu, Philippines

*Brought to you by UA&P I am S.T.R.O.N.G.
What do you think of the short story? :)

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Anonymous said...

how come its easy to break down the fences in stories but not in real life?

Anonymous said...

wow this is so inspiring. i hope the day that the great lightning struck will also struck corrut politicians

Anonymous said...

i'm sure peace is not that far from our reach.. i think the problem is with the people too.. in the story the people were to dependent on their leaders.. peace is not rested on the hands of leaders but in the hands of the people too..

Anonymous said...

i hope things were that simple

Anonymous said...

just passing by.. this entry has something i dont know waht it is yet but with some revisions it would be great

Anonymous said...

to charles:
i also share the same views with you but as an anonymous blogger said to achieve peace we must all work together.. i think it worked weel for the story cause there are limited characters.. hahaha

Anonymous said...

its not real.. peace is a temporary state countries achieved because of money

Anonymous said...

peace out!!

Anonymous said...

oh im tired of politics ill relate this blog to myself.. ill fin inner peace and destroy my fence

Anonymous said...

galing nit ah

Anonymous said...

walangjo lalim nito ah... buti nahukay ko sarili ko ah.. hahaha

Anonymous said...

to jewelz:

yeah limited characters and controlled by human mind. cause politician don't use their minds or if they do its tainted with greed or malicious intention

Anonymous said...

to jewelz:

yeah limited characters and controlled by human mind. cause politician don't use their minds or if they do its tainted with greed or malicious intention

Anonymous said...

kay hirap nito tumanda na sila sa story pa lng sa totoong buhay to apo n nila mag memeet for peace eh.. or pag wala na idedestroy hahaha

Anonymous said...

i'm 55 years old and i grew up in a culture that wants world peace but until now were not even close to achieving it

Anonymous said...

oi charles feeling ka!!!! kala mo kung sino kang malinis mag-salita hehe ang talino mo pakingan sa blog ah hahaha... peace tau!!! un ang goal ng entry na to hehehe

Anonymous said...

syempre nman ako pa. di lng intellect ko gumagana dito pati will hehehe

Anonymous said...

good post!!

Anonymous said...

can i do something about world peace im only a highschool student

Anonymous said...

everyone has a stand or a responsibility for peace.. even an infant has one because he is made in the image and likeness of God

Anonymous said...

lets put it this way peace is for everyone and if you dont make a stand or demand for it you wont achiece it

Anonymous said...

this site makes me strong!!

Anonymous said...

to all my friends na nag comment at inasar ako panalo kau hahaha

Anonymous said...

gabs hintay ko post mo!!!

Anonymous said...

this all happened without any words spoken? myged! awkward silence.. BOOORING! too much drama! eek!

vylettepurpleness said...

ACTION speaks louder than WORDS! duh?! did your mom ever teach you that?!

Anonymous said...

words are overated actions deserves to have some spotlight

Anonymous said...

nice answer vylettepurpleness!! ang galing eh.. straight to the point

Anonymous said...

Thanks pop for sharing this.. :) lots of symbols and imagery..

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed reading this short story...

Anonymous said...

This should be shared with everyone! :) I'll share it with my family and friends.

Anonymous said...

This is easier said than done! If only there was world peace... We can all live in a better place!

Anonymous said...

There is still hope!

Anonymous said...

We just have to trust one another to make this happen...

Anonymous said...

Nice story! Your dad writes well :)

Anonymous said...

The story is short and simple for everyone to understand. You can share it with children and adults... lots of imagery.

Anonymous said...

I hope this story will reach far and wide... share them with your friends!!

Anonymous said...

You can find many beautiful rainbows in Hawaii..

Anonymous said...

how cme you guys talk about rainbows?

Anonymous said...

is rainbow the symbol for peace?

Anonymous said...

to anonymous:
in our class the symbol for peace is a bird

vylettepurpleness said...

no its just colorful and nice to look at - means harmony! and it's part of the logo. let it be. leave the rainbow alone.

Anonymous said...

world peace just like a beauty pageant heheeh

Anonymous said...

i really don't know what to put here. but it's nice! =)

-lil bro.ü

Anonymous said...

peace tayo ha.. iamstrong is a good site

Anonymous said...

what can i do for the world? i'm still young.

-lil bro.ü

Anonymous said...

guys thank yu for the comments!!!

Anonymous said...

what bird? any kind? cheap. it should be a DOVE!

Anonymous said...

wah chill lng ha... any bird will do kaya

Anonymous said...

you're right, ahya! the videos are great nga!

-lil bro.ü

Anonymous said...

btw, what is this for ahya?

-lil bro.ü

Anonymous said...

just dropping by to commend the authogr of this entry.. its a nice piece y the way i hoe you can create you own blog and share your talent with the whole world maybe just maybe it can be the tool for world peace

Anonymous said...

a bird? aahahahhahaa! love it!

Anonymous said...

im saying hi to SARA, (again)

Anonymous said...

chuck_bass?
this is good... do you know what the topic is? how about some decent and worth having comments

critical said...

very nice story, very cute

vylettepurpleness said...

hahaha. chuck bass spotting S.. what the?!

Anonymous said...

no. any kind of bird will not do. so you think a chicken represents peace? i don't think so. it is usually used to fight?! so it should be a dove.. make it more decent.

Anonymous said...

the fence=coolness:)

Anonymous said...

Wonderful story :)

Anonymous said...

with all the conflicts and world domination, there's no better solution than to comprehend and be passive at times when you need to..
i mean, it's better to listen first than speak..
God gave us two hands, two ears and one tongue so that we'll act and listen more than speak..
if all of us will talk and talk and not 'walk the talk' it would be barely possible for us to achieve it..
like the three persons in the story..
they did not say anything just total silence and embrace..and what happened in the end?
they achieved what they had dreamt of..
even though this is just a story but we can pull something from this..the valuable lessons..
and i hope you learned one..
anyway, nice post ate jewelz!

Anonymous said...

to chales:

are you familiar of 'imagery' when it comes to writing stories and poems?
this is what the story is all about.. imagery..
but at the same time it has lots of valuable lessons to it..
and i hope you learned one..
good day!

Anonymous said...

TO HUSBANDS & WIVES who wants to make peace when they quarrel;

You could apply Jewelz article regarding peace. No need to argue much.Just hug & embrace each other.Kapag pumalag at galit pa rin...Just embrace again & dont let Go! THEN PEACE NA...

Anonymous said...

According to the Bible, A Rainbow would remind us of the promise of God that there would never be a flood like Noah's.

Anonymous said...

Simple story but very interesting!

Anonymous said...

After removing fences,BORDERS should be removed too.That way no more Visas to the U.S. and other countries. Wouldnt it be nice? That's the original plan of God anyways.
Planet earth is for all the people,all kinds of people.

Anonymous said...

Peach Strawberry:
I just got out of class.. thank you for your comment! :) and thank you for explaining to CHARLES all about imagery.
I definitely agree with you that sometimes we should stop and listen because most of the time we just talk and talk.. but more importantly, if we want to achieve something, we should of course take action!
Thanks again Peach strawberry!

Anonymous said...

hey... chickens are not a symbol for peace!!

Anonymous said...

rainbows are pretty..

Anonymous said...

hey there lil bro, you can do lots for the world... what about helping your mom out with the chores? That's something.. or even making your bed in the morning. Start with the little things.

Anonymous said...

Respecting your parents and obeying them can be number one on your list... :) what do you think lil bro?

Anonymous said...

True PEACE starts from your Family.How could the world have peace when you dont have peace with your wife,husband,brother,sister or in-laws?

Anonymous said...

we should set aside our differences and work together towards a peaceful world for we are all human beings..

bagay na bagay d2 sa story ung song na "we are the world" by michael jackson and company :D

Anonymous said...

Charles, it is not easy to break down the fences in stories and in real life.

Anonymous said...

Anonymous; it is not nspiring and politician will always be there without lightning.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; Peace is so far out of reach nowadays because of greedyness and corrupt ways of many leaders.

Anonymous said...

To anonymous; Things are really that simple and that's it.

Anonymous said...

To distant blogger; if your comprehension is in tact, you can realy understand this article. Read it again.

Anonymous said...

I agree with you jewelz; we must all work together.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; there are many countries in this world that are in peace without the money that you are saying.

Anonymous said...

to 50 cents; peace in my friend.

Anonymous said...

to sos girls; politics will always be around, so get use to it, its here forever.

Anonymous said...

to bisaya; talagang magaling ito.basahin mo pa ulit marami ka pang matutuhan.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; talagang malalim ito kaya pwede mo ulitin basahin para matuto ka pa.

Anonymous said...

to charles; not all politicians are all alike, some are greedy and some are not. They have a mind of their own like you.

Anonymous said...

to ic.Pilipinas; your comment is kinda funny however, it might be somewhat realist

Anonymous said...

to the old woman; you are still young at 55. I am 70 and still inspired. Peace will be with us with all of us working together.

Anonymous said...

to charles; if you think you are that clever,think again! You probably need some tutoring.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; as a young high school student, you have the opportunity to contribute to world peace by merely doing your own responsibility as a law abiding citizen.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; your comment about the infant image is interesting, and logical

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; you dont have to demand peace to achieve it. You have to fight for it vogrously with all your might.

Anonymous said...

to active reader; your insight about you liking reading the story simply described the essence of the article.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; if you think it so boring to read this article, well, it says lot about you! You can be perceived as an egototistical maniac!

Anonymous said...

to vylettepurpleness; your perspective is much appreciated by other reader like me. I like the rainbow myself.

Anonymous said...

to good girl; sharing this article with your family is a good gesture, I did the same thing.

Anonymous said...

to peacedude; I share your view that it is not easy, but it can be done.

Anonymous said...

to jewelz; sharing it with friend and others will do us all good. Nice comments girl.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous; not only you can find lots of rainbow in Hawaii, you can also have everlasting peace there too. I know because I am from that place.

Anonymous said...

to anonumous; if you dont like talking about rainbow, you can ceratinly read the other part of the article. Mind you rainbow is a symbol of peace.

Anonymous said...

to jewelz, your thoughts about your dad is great.

Anonymous said...

to chuck, bird is a symbol of freedom and peace. You have a bird too that is your favorite. ha ha ha

Anonymous said...

to critical, I am so pleased by your short but concise remarks about the article. I too like it.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous, if you think dove is the best bird for it, then it is. Although some chicken might look like a suitable one.

Anonymous said...

peachstrawberry; I like the way you commented and you are absolutely right about what you said. Keep it up.

Anonymous said...

to jane; what a true and factual thing to say. All of us can learn from it and our family is the starting block.

Anonymous said...

to sarah; you are on target about the subconscious mind. I appreciate your sharing the website for it.

Anonymous said...

to grandma; we can learn something from your insight! But considering your age and wisdom, perhaps there is still room for learning even at our twilight time.

Anonymous said...

to anonymous, setting aside our differences is attainable. There is always a good solution to all of this.

Anonymous said...

to jewelz; Respect must be earned and not given! I agree that we should respect our parents however, not all parents are respectable, there is always exception to the rule.

Anonymous said...

Peace can be achieve by a common objective. Good leadership and less corruption from our leaders is a must.

Anonymous said...

Different nations if you noticed have variety of of colors in their flags. The same concept can be applied by a rainbow! Peace my friends.

Anonymous said...

he article is simply amazing! It has good merits.

Anonymous said...

The choice of a bird either a dove or other beautiful birds can be selected. We all have our choice. Just choose one that makes you feel better.

Anonymous said...

The article deserves praises and good comments. Afterall, it a good gesture to share it with us.

Anonymous said...

The comments made by Charles opposing the views of the articles and at he same time unsettling ones, is welcome as well, but Charles should also think of other people think about him at this point. If you think (Charles)that it is cool the way you commented about this article, heck you got to think more about your personality.

Anonymous said...

Good wisdom and friendship can last a lone time. The three personlities depicted in the article shares the same views bu many of us, and of course differing opinions as well.

Anonymous said...

Mistakes are made by many of us, many comments are shared about this article, but one would think that by just conceptualizing and or understanding the writer's intent, you can only appreciate it.

Anonymous said...

The article deserves praises and good comments.

Anonymous said...

Is our world on the threshold of peace or on the brink of disaster?

A question for everyone

Anonymous said...

From Ping:
Peace can be achieve by a common objective. Good leadership and less corruption from our leaders is a must.

That is true Ping. May I also share that everyone in this world is imperfect that's why we are having difficulty in achieving peace.

Anonymous said...

STRANGE world, this! The civilized people today know more about killing than living, more about war than peace. Yet the inborn desire of man is for life, not death; for peace, not war. How can we explain this topsy-turvy condition?

Anonymous said...

many statesmen have been sincere in their efforts, why have all man’s hopes for peace turned into bitter failures?

Anonymous said...

Here's one reason
Man, as a result of Adam’s sin, is imperfect and sinful; thus no peace pact can guarantee that greedy, selfish rulers will not crop up

Anonymous said...

Another reason...

the superhuman ruler of this world is Satan the Devil. “The whole world is lying in the power of the wicked one,” 1 John 5:19

Anonymous said...

This means that all nations of the earth are under Satan’s control. No peace pacts, bullets or atom bombs can nullify the peace-wrecking efforts of the Devil, “the god of this system of things.”

Anonymous said...

I agree with that

Anonymous said...

To old woman:

Because world peace cannot be achieved by humans alone.

Anonymous said...

This is from an article I've read about mankind's failure
For centuries, men and nations have spoken about peace, have debated peace, have signed hundreds of peace treaties. What has been the result? In the last 80 years, there has virtually never been a moment when some nation or group has not been at war. Clearly, peace has eluded mankind. So the question is, Why have all man’s efforts to establish international peace failed, and why is man incapable of bringing about true peace that will endure?

Anonymous said...

--From the same article

"The simple answer is that mankind has not turned to the right source for true peace. Under the influence of Satan the Devil, men have created organizations that fall victim to their own weaknesses and vices—their greed and ambition, their lust for power and prominence. They have gone to institutions of higher learning and have established foundations and think tanks, which have only thought out more means of oppression and destruction."

Anonymous said...

what article is that from aimee?

Anonymous said...

How would you define unity?

Anonymous said...

absence of friction and strife

Anonymous said...

How we wish the world is free from strife and friction

Anonymous said...

Thousands of peace treaties have been made and broken

Anonymous said...

Often because world leaders are more concerned with their own supermacy than with peace and unity

Anonymous said...

the fact that two nations are not at war does not mean that they are united in peace

Anonymous said...

really, are two men with pistols pointed at each other at peace simply because neither has pulled the trigger?

Anonymous said...

that is true jun

Anonymous said...

Human efforts to unity no matter how sincere have proved futile

Anonymous said...

How can we achieve true, permanent world peace?

Anonymous said...

a smile can build bridges to the fence. it can even bring a very large wall down. break free - smile with all your heart and win a friend

Anonymous said...

it sure is inspiring, especially to the country that we live in now. we have to join hands and break free form corrption. start sitting down and discuss matters that are of importance like education and jobs.

Anonymous said...

offering a sincere and appropriate apology for a wrong committed will go a long way toward making peace.

Anonymous said...

let us all smile... for peace

Anonymous said...

A smile may contribute peace to your neighborhood, but how we wish that a warm sincere smile would bring peace in the entire world

Anonymous said...

we are all hoping for peace, it is human nature. don't worry world peace is fast approaching

Anonymous said...

Humankind today can do nothing to bring world peace, it is beyond our capacity. Leave it to the One who can make all things possible.

Anonymous said...

and for us people, the best thing we can do is to make peace with people we encounter everyday and our efforts will be rewarded.

Anonymous said...

God is the only one who could bring true and permanent peace in the Universe.No one else

Anonymous said...

So no matter how intelligent world leaders may be, bringing true peace here on Earth is not for them

Anonymous said...

certainly

Anonymous said...

but it doesn't mean that we should disobey authorities. We should remain law abiding citizens

Anonymous said...

God permitted them to be in their relative positions

Anonymous said...

and lawsare for our own good like traffic rules

Anonymous said...

Now there is a huge fence in the entire world

Anonymous said...

And soon the lightning will destroy that fence into pieces. That lightning will come from God

Anonymous said...

Peace should start from ourselves

Anonymous said...

Peace should start from ourselves

Anonymous said...

Peace to everyone!!

Anonymous said...

We are in the brink of disaster...

Anonymous said...

how peaceable are we as individuals?

Anonymous said...

you can answer that question personally

Anonymous said...

Iam peaceable.. im friendly...

Anonymous said...

Are you the type that reacts violently when hurt?

Anonymous said...

No, but i think violently.. hehhe just kidding

Anonymous said...

who loves violent movies?

Anonymous said...

i dont, do you?

Anonymous said...

hahahaha... I like watching action movies

Anonymous said...

those are violent movies...

Anonymous said...

hehee... I know you watch them too

Anonymous said...

keep on posting your comments people

Anonymous said...

Buhay pa kaya tayo pag dumating na ang world peace?

Anonymous said...

I wish buhay pa ako nun

Anonymous said...

I want to witness how it's like to be in a world of peace

Anonymous said...

We all wanted to have peace

Anonymous said...

Computer games pa nga lang puro violence ang concept, how can we promote peace

Anonymous said...

Sa karamihan hindi fun kapag hindi violent

Anonymous said...

if the youth today is exposed to violence paano na yan?

Anonymous said...

that is true

Anonymous said...

i agree with that

Anonymous said...

gusto ng tao ng peace but then iba ang output

Anonymous said...

Puro violence and nakikita ng youth today.

Anonymous said...

even entertainment does not promote peace

Anonymous said...

do you notice sa mga computer games, mostly satanic concepts

Anonymous said...

We can ask ourselves do we really like peace?

Anonymous said...

I cansee teenager who are very happy playing in an arcade, very happy kapag nakakapatay sila sa game

Anonymous said...

What is happening to us?

Anonymous said...

kahit sobrang galing ng leader natin if the subordinates itself loves violence, walng mangyayari talaga

Anonymous said...

Violence is everywhere talaga

Anonymous said...

Of course promoting violent games and entertainment is still going on. Who could stop those people?

Anonymous said...

it maybe hard to admit pero its true

Anonymous said...

nice comments...
look around us and think

Anonymous said...

galing ng post na 'to!

Anonymous said...

i like the story

Anonymous said...

It may not bethat simple to attain peace like sa story but it means we all want to have it

Anonymous said...

i commend those who loves peace not just by word but by their actions and mentality

Anonymous said...

I also believe that ethnic differences contribute much in chaos that we have

Anonymous said...

even in the philippines may discrimination pa din

Anonymous said...

I agree with that

Anonymous said...

kapag bisaya ka na pumunta sda manila you can feel that, lalo na for average peaple

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