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Tuesday, February 26, 2008

UA&P - I AM S.T.R.O.N.G: The Fence

Jewelz would like to share a short story written by her dad when she was back in highschool...

The Fence
(A message for world peace)

There was once a white child, a black child, and a brown child. By fate or what seemed like predestination, they were born exactly the same date.

They were next-door neighbors too.

They were energetic and smiling babies, so innocent and care-free, brought to earth in times of unrelenting chaos among nations.

As they grew up, they could constantly hear the voices and laughter of one another.

But they could not meet.

They could not play with one another.

And this made them lonely and isolated.

Each of them could not understand why there was a fence separating their homes.

The years slowly passed by, and the lack of much-needed friendship pushed them to study hard and pursue brilliant careers. They traveled far and wide.

They eventually ended up as the top leaders of their respective powerful countries, handling delicate matters of utmost importance to world peace.

Planet earth was continuously bombarded by myriad of problems arising from greed and the desire for world dominance.

Like an inflated balloon, the bursting point was near.

The world was heading for the ultimate war.

The white man, the black man, and the brown man were called upon to personally meet and try to resolve the most volatile conflict in the history of mankind.

One humid, summer afternoon, a round table was prepared with three simple chairs. There was a lighted candle, a flower, and a dove at the center of the table, in the hope that these three powerful leaders with diverse backgrounds would come to terms and avert the total annihilation of mankind.

The burdens on their shoulders were enormous with so little time left. The future hung on the wisdom of the three, with their advisers and statisticians whispering mixed opinions. The media were in a frenzy, the armies were alert, and the entire populace were uneasy.









They met.

They merely stared at one another, unmoving, with total concentration and focus.

Not a word was spoken.

Somewhere deep in their subconscious mind, an inexplicable feeling of loneliness was suddenly released, a euphoric sensation of happiness.

They meekly smiled.

Unexpectedly, with outstretched arms, they embraced.

The three of them in a glorious triangle of unity.

Together they lifted their tightly-clasped hands and showed their genuine smiles for the whole world to see that peace is the ultimate solution.

Everyone in the room broke down in silent tears, amidst thunderous applause and a standing ovation from the gallery.

Still not a single word was spoken.

Everyone could not understand the wisdom of the three men.

But the three remembered the fence. They knew. They understood.

After that fateful humid afternoon, the three exhausted leaders passed on their instructions to their respective governments and opted to return to their neighborhood where they were born.

The fence was still there.

Dehydration seemed to seep into their bodies and with their last ounce of strength, all three embraced, and the fence gave way to their combined weight.

A gentle breeze swept through their neighborhood and the three men looked high up in the heavens and seemed to fly into the skies above.

And the clouds accepted them.

There were no need for words.

Suddenly, a bolt of lightning appeared from out of nowhere and struck the fallen fence into tiny pieces.

A breathtaking rainbow appeared for all the world to see. And from thereon, planet earth was a beautiful place to live in all eternity.


Written By:
Boogie Lim
Cebu, Philippines

*Brought to you by UA&P I am S.T.R.O.N.G.
What do you think of the short story? :)

271 comments:

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Anonymous said...

and kapag tagalog ka then you went sa visayas, they think of you as mayabang, hehhe

Anonymous said...

We should not be impartial to people who came from a different place or culture

Anonymous said...

"Do unto other what you want other to do unto you" -Jesus Christ

Anonymous said...

even Gandhi agreed with jesus Christ

Anonymous said...

Gandhi said that if only peopple will apply what Jesus said in The Sermon on the MOunt, thre will be world peace

Anonymous said...

World peace... nakakain ba yun?
Parang impossible na

Anonymous said...

don't lose hope nice. There will be world peace

Anonymous said...

when kaya yun?

Anonymous said...

d like to comment about violent entertainments today

Anonymous said...

is very rampant. It molds our youth today. We should condemn violent and satanic entertainment

Anonymous said...

I can't imagine how happy satan is when people patronizes his works

Anonymous said...

And imagine how sad Godand His Son Jesus Christ seeing one that is so fond of the things which originated from satan

Anonymous said...

That was something to think about Nympha

Anonymous said...

Can you imagine your daughter or son playing video games where when they hit the enemies blood squirts out then they are very happy with it?

Anonymous said...

parents are also responsible for promoting peace with their children, it should begin at a young age

Anonymous said...

i have to agree with that

Anonymous said...

let us observe around us, do we really like peace?

Anonymous said...

What do you think God feels about all the violence that is happening?

Anonymous said...

if you think He is sad about it, then we should feel the same.

Anonymous said...

Syempre in the name of business kaya legal pa din violent entertainments

Anonymous said...

Tama nga, we are in the brink of disaster

Anonymous said...

But not to late for those who really want peace

Anonymous said...

The fence nga will be struck by lightning into pieces

Anonymous said...

it means all obstacles sa peacewill be destroyed

Anonymous said...

That's true... That will happen because of love

Anonymous said...

Love? From whom?

Anonymous said...

God. Do you think that as a loving father he wont make a way for his sons and daughters here on earth?

Anonymous said...

His love for us will move Him to act against the "Fence"(wickedness)

Anonymous said...

If you are a parent and you have all the capacity to aliviate whaever hurt your child feels, wouldn't you act?

Anonymous said...

of course a loving parent will do whatever it takes for the child

Anonymous said...

ly. It's the same thing with God

Anonymous said...

I mean exactly, sorry for that

Anonymous said...

So don't lose hope, all we need to do is to make sure that we have a good standing in front og God

Anonymous said...

that's correct, we can't have a good standing befor Him if we love what he hates

Anonymous said...

why make some fence when you can make bridges?

Anonymous said...

i will build bridges - mr. romero says

Anonymous said...

hindi naman lahat ng bisaya ay inaunderestimate ng manilenyo... inggit lang sila kasi mas mayaman ang mga bisaya hehehe

Anonymous said...

burn down our fences

Anonymous said...

it takes courage to bring down a fence, if its among the countries. nationalism is the game

Anonymous said...

que sera sera whatever will be will be

Anonymous said...

cultural differences are ok if its for good use but not if its otherwise

Anonymous said...

be real...

Anonymous said...

racism booo

Anonymous said...

one faith can bind us all -follow jesus

Anonymous said...

satan loves racism-- why should we follow him

Anonymous said...

i will not follow satan

Anonymous said...

no fence

Anonymous said...

love peace

Anonymous said...

world peace psalm 37:10, 11

Anonymous said...

where is peace now

Anonymous said...

wait for u.n's announcement of peace and security - armagedon comes

Anonymous said...

war or peace? where can we find it?

Anonymous said...

give me some lovin... no wars please

Anonymous said...

i hate computer games... they teach kids to fight

Anonymous said...

uch more, its indirectly teaching them to build fences

Anonymous said...

stop playing mantra

Anonymous said...

bakit wala nun sa pinas?

Anonymous said...

no comment

Anonymous said...

i cant believe that people unknowingly make fences even in their childhood years

Anonymous said...

or the kids?was

Anonymous said...

join a cruisade against fences

Anonymous said...

revelations 21:4 they will wipe out every tear from their eyes... formenr things had past away

Anonymous said...

battle with your brain and not with sword

Anonymous said...

miss universe ba ito? world peace?

Anonymous said...

spont the differences

Anonymous said...

fences or bridges... ano ba ang mad importante?

Anonymous said...

watch braveheart!

Anonymous said...

hand in hand we share in the battle for good

Anonymous said...

choose me... fence among lovers

Anonymous said...

anarchy and monarchy

Anonymous said...

communist countries...

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